Ransom's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Effect Compilation]

Yes

i dun rly get it it woznt ne fun 2 ply its jus sum butns 2 press

mayoarm11 responds:

z dat so lil 2 yearz oldiez bayyyy?!? zis iz un tutorial. if no use flash, please fuck off kindly. thank you cummm again

[A Walk in the Park!]

Yay!

That game really chilled me out. A nice way to pass the time. Thanks!

[World of Dreams]

!

You had a good attempt at this. I can appreciate how difficult it is to make a Flash game. I think it would be greatly improved if you had someone else do the graphics. By the style of the scenery, it looks like you must have had someone else draw the chracters. It just needed to come to life a bit more.

Paranoia responds:

I agree, it sucked. I made a good effort, but it sucked. I'm just going to go and burn my hard drive now.

[Amberial]

Hooray!

Possibly the most fun game on Newgrounds. Well done.

[Star Island]

Hey!

Evidently inspired by LocoRoco a great deal, even down to the character's mouth movement ;)

Very well done, nicely coded. Must have been difficult.

[Punk-o-matic]

Wow.

That is quite possibly the best interactive Flash on Newgrounds. So simple to use, and really great-sounding music. And every beat seems to mix well with all the others!
I'm stunned. Great work.

[Suicide 2 -The choice]

Ugh

First of all, that's not really a game, and it can't really be classified as an interactive movie either. Also, if you're going to title a movie, make sure you can spell it correctly. "ChoiCe".

[The FreeLancer : Training]

Wow

That was great. You've put so much effort into making sure the control system works properly, and it shows. This will be fun when you give it an Adventure mode, like a sidescroller or something.

[--Squirrel HUNT--]

Not bad

Admirable graphics, but unfortunately limited and repetitive gameplay.

[Overthrowing Earth (Demo)]

Nice.

You'd got a great grasp of Actionscripting, and a good sense of fun. The full game will be fantastic, no doubt.
Here are my ideas for the full version:
- Better graphics (the ship and cows were good, but the landscape was too basic)
- Continuous flight (rather than getting teleported to base when you fly off the screen, you should come out at the other side of the screen)
- On the later levels, have other things to do rather than just abducting cows. Such as going through hoops in a race course or some other variant.
- Perhaps even a little storyline to go with it? A few cutscenes never hurt anyone :)

Well done.

thewasteofwebspace responds:

hey, thanks for the comments. i will make better graphics definately, the teleporting thing will be fixed and have consequences for crashing. hmm, a race would be fun, and there will be a storyline.

thanks again